Monday, September 14, 2015

If I were poem

If I were a cheetah


If I were a cheetah


I would carefully grab the cub and put the cub to a safe place so it doesn't
get eaten by a hyena


If I were a cheetah


If I were the loud arica is where I live


If I were a cheetah


I would watch the hungry lions killing its prey


If I were a cheetah

I would chase the gazelles like a police chasing a robber  


3 comments:

  1. good work Rui I liked the similie about the cop chasing a robber.

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  2. It was detailed but there was a mistake about the lion s killing the predators

    it should be, the lions killing its prey not predators

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  3. It was detailed but there was a mistake about the lion s killing the predators

    it should be, the lions killing its prey not predators

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